wow I really like this. It kept me entertained the whole time! I enjoyed it very much!!! I found it interesting and no grammar or spelling mistakes at all!
"Be yourself. Above all, let who you are, what you are, what you believe, shine through every sentence you write, every piece you finish."~John Jakes
I enjoyed this so much. The concept was pure genius, and had me hanging on every word. There was a bit of humor which made this even better. I love this. Praise, for you have mad writing skillz
When you turn to face the sun, all of the shadows fall behind you. I used to be Writer97 but that was boring so I changed it. PandaRawr is more me.
Aoow, this is like the fifth time I've read it.. It just make me so happy! It's so very, very funny! I just had to say that again and that you really should keep writing things like these - it suits you!
Also, I didn't give you any spiders last time I reviewed this so I'll give them to you now, here they are. Five/5 perfect, icky, sticky spiders - enjoy!
Good Luck & Keep Writing
// Demoness
"Some say the world will end in fire; Some say in ice. From what I've tasted of desire I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great And would suffice." - Robert Frost
Um, can anybody say "EPIC!" This poem was hysterical in a creepy kind of way. I know I chuckled more than once. Haha, "Please don't mind the Hitler 'stache" That was one of the many lines I favored. You definitely need to write more poems like this. The iPad 50 lol. I absolutely loved it. Keep up the great work!
When I give up, I'm not showing weakness. Sometimes, I'm just showing enough strength to move on.
WOW! That's an amazing poem. I loved it, but not about the part about me going to Hell now that I read this awesome poem! Eh, C'est la vais. (I think that's how you spell it in french, but I'm probably wrong.
There once was a women named Kent, Whose nose was rather quite bent. One day I suppose, She followed her nose, And nobody knows where she went. -Unknown
Oh my gosh, I love this! It's scary and really funny at the same time. I love how you make the reader feel condemned and yet make it exciting, almost deceiving. I wish this could be longer, but there's nothing I don't like.
Space shuttles and beaming cars, chocolate truffles made on Mars. The iPad 50, laser knives, razor blades of children's cries.
Haha I really like this part, especially the iPad reference. You're amazing at this poetry stuff!
WE ARE DAUGHTERS of our Heavenly Father, who loves us, and we love Him.
This is really creative and funny, very entertaining. I like how direct it is, how it addresses the reader. The concept is also really unique, I've actually never seen a poem like this one before, or at least not one executed as well as this. If you can't tell, I liked it. Keep up the good work.
"Never be bullied into silence. Never allow yourself to be made a victim. Accept no one's definition of your life; define yourself." ~Harvey Fierstein
I wish this could be longer, but there's nothing I don't like. 
