Memories On A Shelf

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Took this moments ago, as per usual. I'm using the same camera I've been using. I'm not one hundred percent happy with this camera, because it doesn't have the kind of focus I want, but I'm working with what I have for the time being. But anyway its a PISCIO JVC Waterproof camera. Doesn't have a great lense. Which is depressing. But anyway. The subject matter we have today is located in my bedroom. And thats just a bunch of dodads I have on a shelf. I used Picnik for edits, as usual, and I used a vintage theme which I thought worked against, in a good way, the modernesque of the minion and the panda hat =] I'm still a bit iffy on this one. So critique it as you would anything else.
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TylynTyrannosaurus<3 (tydecker777)




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I think this is really good :) I see what you mean about the focus though. I don't like my camera either lol.

Love the elephant :)
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Wow...You have a Minion! I see what your on about with the focus. Was it dark when you took this? Because that could be another reason for the focus. Maybe you could edit it as well see what you could do :)

Sorry it wasn't much help.
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Hello Tydecker,

I am really in love with this photo. I love the vintage grainy look - grainy on purpose I'm assuming - and it just looks cute. If this was framed I would definitely hang it above my bed, it's just that good.

I understand what you're saying about the focus, it does look a bit fuzzy but only slightly and you can only tell if you're looking for focus problems. Other than that the only other thing I really have to critique on would be the shadow contrast with the items on the shelf. The darkness around the minion and the statue are a bit much and we would be able to see the objects more if the lighting was improved.

I hope you can understand what I mean in the above paragraph. Like I said, I really liked this photo and I would like to see more from you.

Love,

ReiseP.
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