God Creates Beauty

Focus mostly on the flower please

I'm getting its meaning It's true that God creates ONLY beauty and humans are the ones who creates ugliness by destroying creation

What the post above me said. But dud you really want a review in this? Or was this for fun?

I sincerely wish I could draw as well as you can. This is perfect. Honest to God, it looks like you traced it; that's how good it looks.

Heya Rasc!

So, I actually had a couple of things to point out here as far as nitpicks go. But only a few. Nothing too crazy, promise.

The first is that the petal-portion of the flower is rather large. It feels a bit like a caricature of a flower more than just a flower (and I don’t think you were trying to make it into a comic, we you. It definitely just feels too big for such a large stem.

And then the stem. You have an odd amount of yellow in it. And that does confuse me. But more than anything, I really just encourage you to take a little extra time to add even a drop of detail to the leaf on the stem. He seems a bit drab in comparison to the rest of the flower.

Lastly is the grass. It just seems a little sad because it’s so small in comparison to that large flower. Proportion is key.


Overall, this is pretty good. You have a lovely, sweet message in here and the writing is quite nice. But the rose idea seems a little cliché. It would have definitely been refreshing to see a slightly more exotic flower type than anything else.

Otherwise, best of luck! If you have any questions,


Overall, this is pretty good. You have a lovely, sweet message in here and the writing is quite nice. But the rose idea seems a little cliché. It would have definitely been refreshing to see a slightly more exotic flower type than anything else.

Otherwise, best of luck! If you have any questions, just send me a message or leave a wall post!

~lilymoore

Hey there! You have a really great start here =] I love the message and the flower is simple, making it easier to for onlookers to see and understand your message. One thing I would have liked to see, is a little bit more of a background, to make that flower really pop. It made me smile looking at this, because I had something sort of like this once. But the message of mine was that, theres a good and bad side of everything, but no matter what it was beautiful. And thats a really big part of beauty, there's always some sort of imperfection that makes it unique. So maybe try to show that Everything is beautiful, not just the obvious things. The broken petals of the rose, its thorns, the matted roots. Those kinds of things. You don't have to add anything, take all of my comments as a grain of salt. You have a really nice, solid piece here =]

I love your drawing. It is so lovely and sentence you've written 'God creates ONLY beauty' is beautifully written. Well done with that.
- The flower is very well drawn. However, it lacks some shading. Maybe the drawing appeared too light as you may have captured it using a camera.
- Also, I'd like to comment on the leaf and the upper part of the stem. It is too yellow. Also try to add some more leaves with different sizes.
- I also love the way you drew the grasses. The dark shading beneath it would be unnecessary.

Great job!

@shiney1 it was for fun, but I do like feed back on it.

Thanks for all the reviews.

Well, what to say????
It was a good start actually. Your title is really good. I found only one negative thing in your art. The rose looks bigger than the plant. JK
Anyways great job...

Hey. The rose looks pretty. You can try filling in color if you want. It'll look more eye-catching. And a few more flowers or a colorful background can also suit the title. There are dozens of cool ideas and your's is one of them. The message is displayed clearly. And I love the way you've written, 'God Creates Only Beauty'. I'd say "Hats off to your creativity"

Considering your age, this was a pathetic attempt. Ofcourse, the message is true, but it does not go with the drawing you did. I don't know why people liked it 'a lot', and some even said 'it is perfect'.

Okay, what you can do in this drawing to improve it considerably is:

1. Fill in the rose
2. Do some shading ... its easy
3. Take a picture of it and then upload it. The scan quality was not good, and it may have subdued some of the colors.

hope you take it as constructive criticism