Loved it! The start reminds of something that happened to my friend, reminds me of how we both felt . Just one thing, how she clenches her fists until she cuts her palms and they bleed, things like that just irritate me. I guess because I've read it in books so many times and afterwards you never hear anything about them wiping the blood off or something; straight away it's like it never happened. And furthermore, I can't see how it's possible anyway. Otherwise, to be honest this sounds like it could be published already! The mysterious tension you've built has left me wanting more! Great work! = D
This review is a completely pointless review whose purpose is to be a review only in characters because nobody can rightly review a piece that has been deleted, and seeing as how this piece has been in the Works with 1 Review queue for forever, standing in the way of bringing the count in said queue down to zero, here I am giving this a non-review review to knock it out of the queue.
Though if you ever do repost this chapter, I'd be more than happy to give it a proper review, else review another work of yours. Just shoot me a PM.
