Rescue Romance

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Et, voila!

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Bow before the most amazing piggy kiss ever captured to digital media! Bow!


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Yes, this is the first thing I thought of when I saw this contest. The. First. Thing.

Apologies to all British folk.

Drew in pencil, traced and colored in Paint. I blame all flaws on my method.

Transcription in case you can't read it:
Panel 1
Him: Mmm, nothing like a spiffy cuppa, wot wot?
Her: Indeed. Smashing.

Panel 4
Her: I say!

Panel 5
Him: I say!

Panel 7
background: *hff hff hff*
I am reminded of the babe by you.




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I just lover it did you make it all by yourself. :)




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I love it! it is so creative! did you make it yourself? if you did you are an awesome artist!
My friend does art, i dont know much about it, but what i do know is that your picture rocked!
Maybe you should join a wrighting sight like deviantart.com just a thought.
you rock! keep up the good work.
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Very good! I'm not sure how the contest goes, but my only recommendation would be to fill in the white spaces. I know it's pretty hard with Paint. You should try GIMP! Haha I tell this to everybody on here. It's basically a free Photoshop. Good luck in your contest!




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WOW! I like the british style, your drawing ( of course ), the storyboard, the colors. Everything! I hope you win the contest. I'd love to see more the comics style you make. It is great!!
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This actually makes me want to marry you.

Sorry to sound like one of those annoying OMG UROCK! I lllllluuurrrv yoooouuuu!!!!! people, but I seriously love this! I most definitely know that Snoink will love it even more. :) I'm not even sure how I'd go about critiquing something like this, so I won't embarrass myself.

All I can suggest is that, if possible, make the dialogue in the speech bubbles a bit more clear. I could read the I SAY! parts, but it was just panel 1 and 7 I couldn't quite see until I squinted a little. I didn't actually realise the black things in panel 7 were letters/words until I read the spoiler. It's not an earth-shattering problem or anything though, so it didn't bother me much. Just if you can, I'd try and change the font to something a bit easier to notice maybe.

Awesome job, and I wish you great luck in the contest, although I doubt you'll need it!

Keep up the good work,

xoxo Skins
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.




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Wowsers.

This is awesome. XD I'd keep the white bits because I like the textured feel it gives. The writing is rather difficult to read, because it looks a bit too pixelated. Panels 3 and 6 are a bit unclear. It took me a bit of squinting to make out that Panel 3 was a dead fly in the tea because it was quite vague and undefined. Panel 6 is the fly getting squished, sa? Why is it green? It looks a bit like lettuce.

I still really loved this, despite the lettuce, lol. ^_^
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Awwww. Piggies. Soooo cute. I love it. :3 Hahaha...Very good job. Did you do that? If so, bravo to you.
..::JASPERSKYE::..




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Yay! How did you know I was partial to comics? ;)

Anyway, this was a really neat comic, and the artwork is definitely fab! I love the white bits too, as Twit said. It made it have a really nice textured feeling!

My main complaint is the text... it's reeeeeeeeeeally hard to read, and if it weren't for the explanation below, it would be impossible to read!

Also... the sixth panel? A caption, such as "SPLAT!" would have been great there, since, as Twit implied, it did kind of look like lettuce and I was a bit confused.

Love the plot line! :D
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Haha this is so cute! I don't know much about art or anything, so I don't know what to say. But I think you did a good job. It made me laugh! :D
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Since I have no idea what the contest was, this seemed extremely random and it made me giggle uncontrollably inside. Thank you!



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