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This poem is about 4 years old, and I realize it's not that good. I tried to get the easiest nitpicks out while typing it up 
Enjoy!
Enjoy!I look out over the ocean;
up to the great blue sky.
A gentle breeze to toss my hair
and you stand at my side.
You look at me and smile,
and my heart begins to fly.
You take my hand, so gentle,
I never want to say good-bye.
We walk over to a bench
right on the water's edge.
I sat down, gratefully;
you stare at a far-off ledge.
Instead of sitting next to me
you got down on one knee.
You took out a small black box;
it's me you want to please.
That's when I caught my breath,
and tried to clear my throat.
My hands were trembling, what a mess!
But still, I was full of hope.
Then I was in the air,
colliding into you.
We both fell to the ground,
and instantly you knew.
Though no words came from your mouth,
I knew what you meant to say.
You kissed me once, tenderly.
I said yes to you today.
You stood me up,
but once again,
I fall into your arms.
You kiss my hair,
and finally,
happily ever after,
The End.
I could just picture the whole thing as I was reading the poem! One line that I'm not quite sure about tho, "A gentle breeze to toss my hair". Maybe think of using "A gentle breeze gently tosses my hair"... Although your line could be more effective? haha, maybe just check what the other reviewers have to say. I really did enjoy it tho - was like reading a fairytale story 
