Goodbye

To say goodbye is hard
but it's harder to not.
And what stopped me?
I forgot.

I missed my chance,
more so I miss you.
I didn't say goodbye
now there's nothing i can do.

I'll never get the chance to say it again
and i missed my chance
before the end.

So I'll say it now
the only way i can
I love you and goodbye.
- your biggest fan.

It's a nice poem. I think you might play around with the wording in the third verse to see if you can create a little more of a flow.

So I'll say it now
the only way i can
I love you and goodbye.
- your biggest fan.

The last line seems to me to change the topic too much. The title is "Goodbye", but you haven't said "goodbye" at the very end.

I did like the message in this poem, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Too short.
Too forced.
Too confusing.


AROO!
You need to capitalize that I.... yeah.... heh.

i think it was very brilliant i think it had a good enough flow as it is i perticuly liked this bit I'll never get the chance to say it again
and i missed my chance
before the end. very nice