An unedited drawing of what my character, Henry Wilson looks like. (Yes, I know. His clothes look really crooked and weird. Tell me what you guys think anyway!
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I think this is really neat =] The clothes look fine, the crookedness makes it look more realistic like. My brother is currently watching Anime right now, so this sort of sparked my curiousity =] This is really lovely. I'd work with the shading a little bit more, but other than that, its great =]]
Wowza. I wish I could draw manga people that nice. And his clothes arn't that crooked. Ya you could work with the shading a bit more. I particularly liked the eyes. Keep drawing 'cus I think you're awesome
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This is really nice. The head is well proportioned to the rest of the body. And the eyes are pretty good too.
1) His ears look a wee bit too small. Maybe make them larger to fit the rest of the head. That is what stood out the most to me in terms of improvement. 2) The hair would look much better id was "cleaned up" a bit, so to speak. Definite lines. The whole picture will look better after some cleaning, really, so that's just in the future, I guess? Clothes too.
This is very good! Nice head and neck, very nice. Keep drawing
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I really enjoyed this. The eyes were brilliantly drawn. I really appreciated this since I have just started getting into manga and anime. I think youbdid everything really lovely except for one minor thing, don't let it get you down though. A little more defined shading on the hair.
Thanks for the compliment! And yeah, I could improve on the shading... It's just that he's technically blonde, and so I'm not very sure how to shade blonde hair. O_o
Reading is the sole means by which we slip, involuntarily, often helplessly, into another's skin, another's voice, another's soul.
This looks a lot like Zero from Vampire Knight x) The eyes and hairstyle are pretty unique to that series. Did you use him as reference? Or am I totally wrong about that lol.
Overall this is a great drawing, you really paid attention to your proportions and I think they turned out nicely. Only the neck looked a bit long to me, but no biggie. Keep practicing
I didn't see any problem with the way you shaded his hair, usually with blonds I don't shade at all I just color it later.
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You've got amazing talent. The reason I love manga is because of the many ways in which characters can be portrayed. And I really like the way you've penciled him out. He looks a tad familiar but yet definitely unique. The pair of eyes that you've drawn on him are just pure gold. I'm a sucker for art like this. I can only imagine the colouring you can do to this and make it even more vibrant.
This is great stuff and I hope you keep posting more awesome art. Thanks for sharing!