Picture of Shroom Forest I Drew in German Class

Sorry about the quality, its been in my binder for a while so its a bit crumpled.

The path says "Follow the rainbow, Child."

Das ist sehr hübsch. Does your German teacher know that you draw in class?
I wonder what this would look like with a little colour. Not completely coloured, but just to bring certain things out.

I'm struggling to find something to make myself feel helpful in this piece, so these comments are extremely nit-picky.
It could be that I just don't see them, but I would give the eye some eyelashes. I like the little starburst you have in the eye, but it doesn't have a pupil.
It could be misshapen from the crinkling of the paper, but what is that dark oval above the eye?
Overall, I thought this was a very cute doodle.
Happy drawing!
-Sea-

Hiya!

I really like this picture, I like the hidden depths to it, and I think your shading is good too. I like the ... randomnoss/retro style to it. I love the mushrooms, but the writing is a bit iffy, I wouldn't have known what it said if you hadn't told us. I like the pattern on the shrub next to the spotty mushroom by the way, and the cracked eye is really clever.

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I draw randomly in German too! xD Naughty me!

You have a way with a pencil (See what I did there? xD Probably not xD) and keep drawing!!!

+ I agree with the reviewer above, some highlighted colours would deffinatly enhance it

Heya Moti! This reminded me of Alice in Underland =] The shrooms, the eye, all of it just really tied together for me. If I could change anything, I'd want the lights and darks to vary and tie together a bit more. You have a really good raw set up, it just needs a little bit more flesh. I'm also really curious about the words. At the top left I see a little bit, but it got cut off on the end, and down the middle, I thought they were just designs at first, but then I thought they could be words. Overall, this is really cool =] It was fun to look at and left me thinking a lot about what it would be like to be ten inches tall in Underland =] This was great!

and excuse me, I didn't read before what the words said, my apologies =]