What a cliffhanger to leave it on!!!! when I first started reading, I was like...ok, eccentric scientist, skeptical peasants, what could happen? I can't wait to see if you have any more!
Only one thing i noticed -
“If my calculation are correct, and they must be,” said the professor,
Did you mean to say calculations?
Other than that I loved it and I can't wait to see if you've got any more!
...we're only good for the latest trends...
I walk on wounds that seldom prove to slow me down
'Writing is a cop-out. An excuse to live perpetually in fantasy land, where you can create, direct and watch the products of your own head. Very selfish.' ~ Monica Dickens
Dear Hazelgreen, and thank you for the lovely reaction! Alas, the ending isn't a cliffhanger, it's supposed to be a 'twist ending', like with the other professor Hosselhoff story. I had dreamed these two stories the other night and upon waking jotted them down immediately. PM me when you need a review:)
