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Girl named Sydney

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I didn't really like this one.

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Ah. I tried drawing annoyed peach.
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Great drawings! I loved them all. However you miss some of the 'Anime details'. For example, the eyes; which are very important when it comes to drawing Anime characters. In any anime's eyes you would find white spots and some shades, take a look at that link to see what I mean http://www.dragoart.com/sv/tuts/6898/1/ ... e-eyes.htm
I have another comment on the second picture. The guy's shoulders are not very well drawn. Try drawing them again.
I really like the third drawing, the dress and the girl's hair are lovely. I'd love to see that in colors. Well done!
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Dear Boolovesyou,

I like your Anime-Art a lot!

1: Your first picture was pretty cool. I liked this one the best. You might want to add a bit to the eye's, though. For example, try to add the irises. Anyways, I am definitely not complaining.

2: This one was not really that good. You could have done better. Remember one tip whenever you are going to doodle: Always make sure that the size of the head goes four times in the body. If it doesn't, then it means that your figure's head is way too big.

I can't really tell about this, mainly because of the fact that the entire body is not there. try and draw it fully and check.

3: I liked this one (the last one), but Peach looked a lot sad, not annoyed. You might want to add the wrinkles that come between your eyes and your nose. And the eyebrows. Yep, you forgot those. Here is a site that you can go to to be able to look at Peach: http://www.google.co.in/imgres?imgurl=h ... 80&bih=650.

4: Try to perfect the noses as well.

5: Also, try to scan your pictures before uploading them, not taking photos. These were photos, weren't they? If they are photos and you cannot scan them, then just try to make the sharpness and the brightness more by using Photoshop or http://www.picnik.com.


Good luck for more of your drawings! :D :wink:

Regards,
Nova :twisted: :?
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"Oh, you can't help that, we are all mad here."

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Hey there ^_^

My favorite has to be Peach! Although I didn't see Peach at first, just a pretty girl in a dress. I think if you really payed attention to Peach's features and maybe added something in the eyes instead of leaving them empty. Though your proportions on her body are magnificent! I think her hand might be a tad too big, since her arms look so delicate. But that's the only thing I can find! Peach has no eyebrows! Eyebrows are crucial in adding emotion, and since you were going for annoyed, I definitely think adding some would help express that.

Back up to the top. Another good drawing! The face looks great, and the body's ok, but when you put them together something is off. The head is too big for the body. I also think the lips should be moved up a little more towards his nose. And like the Peach one, try to shade in the eyes and not leave them empty. You want your drawings as alive as possible.

The one in the middle is really cute. I love the face! He seems to balance well, but his chest looks a little too big and his arms don't match. The hair is amazing. But again, I'm a little unnerved by the empty eyes O_O It's the most fun thing about drawing anime in my opinion, is making those shiny eyes.

Hope I helped! Keep drawing :D
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I really like these a lot! :) My favorites are the second and the third drawings! It seemed to me that the proportions in the first one were a little off. For example, the body and neck of the person seem a little small compared to the head. The mouth also seems a little too low and the eyes a little too high. Overall, though, they are all nice sketches! I would like to see them in more detail!!! :)



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