I really thought that this was great. I know someone said before that you can say things like this without being cliche, which points out your talent. There were a few spelling and grammatical mistakes, the one that jumped out at me the most being your spelling of 'loathe'. But I really liked this poem, and I'm really sorry that there isn't anything else that I can say about it. -Alex
It blows my mind how many people LOVE math but still feel they can relate I HATE MATH with a passion that would make that movie Braveheart look like a Disney production. I honestly don't believe there is a hate anything near the hate for math. I can appreciate it, its the creation and discovering of worlds, just like writing, but its a cruel, strict, definitive world that leaves no room for imagination You have a good poem, but as before mentioned, put some narrative details/jargon into it that link it to its name - math. Also, "I burst into butterfly jitters" isn't really a line I would use in a poem displaying so much disgust just a quick nit pick. Otherwise, very good. Keep it up.
"Dad, I'm hungry." Hello hungry! "Dad! I'm serious." I thought you were hungry? "Are you kidding me?" No. I'm dad.
Anyway, of course, I dig the poem. It expressed my hate-filled thoughts perfectly, which is of course, the ultimate proof that math is, in fact, evil. The only thing I could say I disliked was, as mentioned before, the rhyming scheme because I really couldn't find one. The flow wasn't as... flowly as I would like, but hey. Math makes people do crazy things.
This poem speaks the truth!!! Even though I'm reasonable at math I absoloutely HATE it! I love how you put "mwahahahah" in the title, it got my attention. There isn't really anything else to say. Keep up the fantastic writing!
God gives us our relatives - thank God we can choose our friends. - Ethel Watts Mumford A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out. - Walter Winchell “I’ll Surprise you, I promise” -Adam Lambert
Great poem! I myself despise math. I completely hate it with a passion and would rather have it removed from the word completely... But that would end in a terrible disaster... Math just isn't for me.
Anyways! Aside from the small comma problem that someone posted above me with, it was a great work. Keep on writing.