Girls and Boys By Good Charlotte Rewrite

Educated, and slutty
She’s half dressed not funny,
And always says something, in most conversions
Coz she’s got her foot in everyone’s faces
And we pay for everything,

She’s just like a
Guy with menstrual issues
She takes pride in gagging you with tissues

Your life or Freedom
Don’t matter
She’ll flat’n em
Laughing at your slip ups
She’ll take your guy with her D cups
She’ll get what she wants she’s not willing to please
This type of girl always comes with a fee
But she wants it all for free

She’s just like a
Guy with menstrual issues
She takes pride in gagging you with tissues
And she takes what she can, because she has all she takes,
She’s got the body and the red Ferrari
She’s just like a
Guy with menstrual issues
Let’s go!

She’s just like a
Guy with menstrual issues
She takes pride in gagging you with tissues
And she takes what she can, because she has all she takes,
She’s got the body and the red Ferrari
She’s just like a
Guy with menstrual issues


All of her toys and all of her curls
Cracking the floor with 4 inched heels
All of her toys and all of her curls
Cracking the floor with 4 inched heels
All of her toys and all of her curls
Cracking the floor with 4 inched heels
All of her toys and all of her curls

I can understand the story behind it, but to me it sounded much like a song. Especially the last verse,

MeganWeaver wrote:All of her toys and all of her curlsCracking the floor with 4 inched heelsAll of her toys and all of her curlsCracking the floor with 4 inched heelsAll of her toys and all of her curlsCracking the floor with 4 inched heelsAll of her toys and all of her curls

You repeated yourself to much. There were also quite a lot of spelling mistakes and lines that could of been separated into two separate lines like:

MeganWeaver wrote:And always says something, in most conversions

MeganWeaver wrote:And she takes what she can, because she has all she takes,

But all in all I can totally understand the type of people you talk about and I actually enjoyed reading this.

Thank you Deanie :] I understand your criticism however the original was a song and so I have followed the structure it used but I have changed the words. :] If your google to title I'm sure it will make my point clearer :] Thanks again x