It's kind of my view of this music piece, wrote it while listening to it, and also figured that the font added to the mood of the poem, so posted it as an image (it's allowed, right...? At least I wasn't able to find anything regarding it in the rules)
Wow this is really cool! I'm assuming you made it? Awesome Is this an original? I quite enjoy the idea of making banners with the poems, it's really need. I also liked the piece itself. Good job!
Keep writing! <3 Sara.
"The differences in life are what create the challenges which open the door to discovery."
Hi! interesting format.The first line is a really effective way to show the passage of time " leaves are falling down in my world fade in fade out", at least that's the impression I got from it. I really liked how you used the word placement and illustrated the actions through sounds. I'm just confused about the title, "..The Rainbow Is Already Here" but in the poem it is already gone. Other than that I liked how simple it was while still getting the emotion across.
This was a very good poem and I loved the format because it gave more of a picture than it would of if it was just plain. It was an effective piece and it didn't drag out forever which I love. The title confuses me though, I think that you might of meant for people to understand that through the poem it is there but then the person is "too late" and it's gone. But then again I have no idea. All in all this poem was very good but the title just confused me. Anyway that's just my opinion.
"Wouldn't it be a strange world- if bears were bees and bees were bears? For if bears were bees they would build their nests at the bottom of trees.That being so if bees were bears they wouldn't have to climb up all these stairs."- A.A Milne, Winnie the Pooh.
Is this an original? I quite enjoy the idea of making banners with the poems, it's really need. I also liked the piece itself. Good job!
