my trip to the park

These are some pics I took at the park last time. This is my first time at photography and I took them on my cell phone so they are pretty bad

These are pretty good, considering they come from a cell phone camera. It's annoying trying to take pictures with a cell phone. The fire picture was a bit noticeably out of focus, but other than that, these were really good. Great job!

I really like these ^_^

They're quite good for a cell phone *feels strange for typing 'cell' phone*, I doubt mine could evr get that good quality
I'd have to say my favourite is the third one, closely followed by the fourth. They're so interesting, and I love the colour scheme of black, blue, purple, grey, green and gold. It looks really dark and stormy in the third one XD

nitpicks: For me, the first to are very boring, and cliche. They aren't very interesting or eyechatching :/

Keep up the photography!

~Tinkem

These are great. I almost like the little scratchy look to them. It makes them look a old and weathered and pretty. The fire one is too blurry, but I love the bluish-purple color.

I think the last one would have to be my favorite. That looks the best with the low-quality picture. Very beautiful.

-Dai

Hi,

Good job! they look like paintings. :]

Farewell,
A.

Hey there =]. These photos are pretty good. My one qualm that has to go for almost all of them, is that they're all from the same angle, you're looking down at something. One that could have been really interesting is the one of the creek. Photography isn't Just about snapping a photo, its about experimenting with angles and light. Seeing that you took these with a cellphone, you did pretty good. =] But next time you go out into a really beautiful place, take a camera! haha. Try getting down closer to the water and getting abnormal angles. Overall, descent shots, especially for a cellphone. =]

Hi there!
I started out using a mobile phone, then moved onto a poor camera then to my DSLR, so I think I can give you some tips!
Firstly, start saving now for a camera if you want to get into photography! I wouldn't buy a DSLR just yet, but you can pick up decent compacts for around £100 (sorry if that's not in your currency ). Until then, I would just experiment with angles, do some research online (about photography, and techniques) and get familiar with a good editor (I use Photoshop Lightroom. It's very simple to use and you can get great results!). That way, when you do get your camera, you'll already have some great ideas!
Secondly I would set up a Deviantart or Flickr, to show off your photography, as well as posting here. You can get some really good feedback, and you'll be able to track the difference as you improve! It also means that if you turn out to be a pro at it, you'll have a ready made online portfolio .
Thirdly, I'll just make a few comments about the photos.
The first one is interesting, but the fuzziness/lack of colour doesn't help it. Of course you can't expect much from a phone This applies to the 2nd, 4th, 5th and 6th photos too. The third one is great. With some editing it could look really cool!

Overall, you have potential! If you need any help, just pm me! Also you can check out my flickr for ideas if you like

-snails-