Love

Love is new.Love is hidden until it grabs you by surprise and takes you whole for a joyous ride.
Love can give you joy and misery.It also can keep you company,and make you feel complete with no worries to debate.
Love is the emotion that keeps you going through each day.

I think you should definately make this longer. I'm not sure, were you going for something short like this, are you just pouring out whatever you're thinking right now, or is this just how you envisioned this to be? If this is what you meant for this piece to be, I actually really like it. It's a poem that can really be read aloud, if you think about it. Good job, keep writing!
-Alex

Hey there, Trackrunner. Okay, so this is a really good poem. ^_^ I really like it. Except that you should make it look like one. Make stanzas, click enters. Here I'll show you how I'd do it:

trackrunner1999 wrote:Love is new,
love is hidden,
until it grabs you by surprise,
and takes you whole for a joyous ride.

Love can give you joy and misery.
It also can keep you company,
and make you feel complete with no worries to debate.
Love is the emotion that keeps you going through each day.

There, now that looks like a poem. I must say you're a really talented writer. Keep it up! ^_^

~Solvy<3

I agree Solvalery. I think that you should make the stanzas and verses shorter and more spread out so it is easier to read. I loved the poem, anyway. Keep up the good work!

I really like this poem but in this line takes you whole for a joyous ride. I would change joyous ride to joyful and take out the word whole-other then that I liked it.

So I was posting on your wall and read that you wrote a poem called "love" and thought I'd check it out, and now here I am and I really like it its captures the emotion and you did a good job! Keep up the good work.