Darkness

It fills my deep and rotting soul which has no heart.
The majesty of it is overpowering.The beauty is great but deadly.
It shows power and grace but no mercy.It underminds the great and taunts
the weak and restless, but grants the brave with prosperous rewards and horrible beauty.

your poem was pretty awesome so keep doing what you're doing.

Technically, this is quite a good poem - you have a good grasp on vocab, grammar and punctuation. One remark; I think you could do with a little more flow. And it didn't really grip me; it felt a little forced, or like you didn't mean what you were saying. Exempt from that, it's quite good.

Howdy there!

I think your poem has a good start, however I think it is very short, and although it stands well on its own, it could easily be developed and extended.

I thought the use of language was excellent, it made the perfect imagery which is just what a reader once.

In addition the use of enjambment helps the poem to run freely, and because of this it gives the poem leeway to be extended!

Well done!

Hey There,
I liked the choice of words and all, but, i found it didnt quite grasp me in. I didnt find myself very entertained, because i didnt feel the emotion, and the meaning didnt quite get to me. i wasnt sure if it was just me or not, but yeah, as i said, i didnt find it pulling me in, making me want more. But otherwise, job well done and if your enjpying what your doing, keep doing it

Black Ink x.

I think your poem was very good, but had a resistance to flow, yet I like what you were getting at! Great job for your first poem!

I really like this poem but it might be better if it was a little longer.

It's a great concept and no huge grammatical errors. Except in the second and third line it doen't look like there are spaces after the periods (I'm part grammar nazi, these things catch my eye). Other than that it's perfect.

Welcome to the site! This is a nice poem on the subject matter. I noticed you are missing spaces after periods, simple mistakes, simple fixes. I liked how you admired darkness, while describing its treacherous qualities, giving it a noble feel especially at the end. The long-lined form especially draws out and emphasizes the adoration with me personally. Neat poem! Looking forward to more from you.

Ah! I really liked this except for it sounded a little too forced, like all you were writing were statements that weren't all related to each other, only to the title. All in all I liked what you had to say, though, and it was nice!

I love this the subtle hints at the corner of my vision hinting at darker things. It speaks so much with so little, which is often hard to come by these days. Keep it up.