End

What will happen when it all comes to an end?
What will happen when the sky opens and fire falls?
Freedom will cry out
We'll fall to our knees
We'll welcome your name
And love you till the end

I liked this poem. It was short, simple, and easy to remember!

But I think this could be the start or the end of much longer poem. But I LOVED it nonetheless.

Keep Writing!

KJR

What will happen when it all comes to an end?

Quite a morbid opening line, however it very effectively grabs the readers attention and you carry on grasping the feelings and possibly the fear of death throughout the poem. I also think that it could be developed into a longer piece of writing in which you could possibly expand on the idea of 'loving' whoever or whatever it is that you mention in the last line.

Very good writing! Keep going!

Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today!
Here we go!

annapapadimitriou123 wrote:What will happen when it all comes to an end?
What will happen when the sky opens and fire falls?
Freedom will cry out
We'll fall to our knees
We'll welcome your name
And love you till the end

Overall: Yes we will.
Great job, great poem, and the shortness was direct and to the point.
I love it.
God Bless!

Keep Writing!
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-Jojo