Paradise

I'm no expert on poetry, but this was short and sweet. I saw no spelling errors. If it was just a little longer, it would be great.

I especially liked the line, 'Constant love jumps from tree to tree.'

I don't think I've ever seen an ABC poem on here. And I didn't know you could write one with just A-D. I loved it! Simple and sweet with so much beauty. There's so much imagery.

The only line I would like to point out is the second to last:

Dances in the caves and,
Floats amongst the island’s chain.

The comma after the and was quite unnecessary and it made the poem pause a weird place. But other than that the poem flowed beautifully.

There's something to be said for short poems, but I think it might be a little too short, it feels like it's a part of a longer poem. Excellent word choice, great imagery. Nice poem.