I Died With You; Why Am I Still Alive?

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Removed as I want this account deleted.

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A writer is someone who finds writing more diffucult than everyone else.-Not quite sure who said this but it's kinda true don't you think.

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I’m really not a big fan of poetry but this I really liked. The last stanza was my favourite.

leaving nought but a cold, dark stone
imprinted with titles, sweet nothings and regrets.

^ I loved that so much.

Well done. Keep writing

In faith there is enough light for those who want to believe and enough shadows to blind those who don't. -- Blaise Pascal

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He opened his bronze urn,
the home in which your soul would remain,
and sucked up the life you had left.

I absolutely adored what you wrote here. I feel like I can actually picture the deceased person's soul being sucked into the bronze urn.

Faith, Trust, and Pixie Dust

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The best speculative fiction peels your mind and shows you the familiar from a direction you have not looked in before
— Neil Gaiman