Cold Nostalgia

Removed as I want this account deleted.

This is really good best I'v seen so far! And thanks for the review I'll make sure to change the stuff u'd mentioned, keep on writting I'd love to see more of your work

Although I don't have any helpful comments to improve your piece, I just wanted to say that I liked it just the way it is!

Not anymore. I wish your heart would thaw this way.

I thought this line might be broken up into two lines, because it's two different sentences, but I don't know much about the structure of poetry, so maybe not. I think it works well either way!

<..> Kat

Honestly, I loved this. It's real and to the point. I liked when it said

I steady remain, Position unchanged, With my knowledge staying the same. I know nothing

Keep writing.