Pegasaus

Hello Everybody,
I am sorry about not having the horse in colour. I did colour it but it didn't look good at all so here is a picture before I coloured it. It did take a while so please don't be too harsh, constructive criticism is still welcome just give me a reason if you don't like an aspect of it.
From CuteJackRussell

Hey there,


Okay so first off I have to say "Hello" to a fellow NZer

And then for the review.... It's not a bad drawing. I think if anything maybe the background should have been all in one direction

Keep at it, and don't stop drawing

Hey it's better than anything I can do. I do like it, it's kind of liberating. It has transfixed me and it will hang in the Louvre soon than later!

I liked the idea of this picture but there were a couple of things that seemed off with this picture.The wings are coming off the buttocks and not the haunches of the pegasus. The legs look like soggy noodles.Shadows around the eyes make it look like an insomniac. Tail looks like a block of doom. Hooves are just square and not organic shapes. Ear looks kind of like a horn because it sprouts from the head.Wings could have a more feathery appearance. Proportions of a horse are off, I suggest researching and practicing drawing the anatomy of a horse for it is unique and challenging. You did a great job effort wise, and good luck with future drawings

I agree with Growlithe on the critiques. The knees are a bit low, and don't seem to have very defined bones. Try making the bends a little sharper. Also, the front legs both appear to be on the same side of the horse. The nearest one is fairly well-proportioned, but the farther one is correctly positioned.
Overall, though, you've got a very good start. The style is whimsical, and I quite like the background; it has a psychadelic feel to it, the way the colors seem to flow in different directions.
Keep up the good work!