Disgrace to Wolf Picture 3

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I dunno what I think of this one. I think I like it. Ignore the little thing on the left side of his face (the little white spot) - I didn't crop it right.

What you need to know: He is the son of a dragon. He calls her Wolf.

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Hey I can't believe this doesn't have any comments! I think it is a lovely pic.
I don't see at all what you're talking about with the white spot on his face, I don't see it.
I like his expression. It's kind of like 'omg, what's she doing!' which is cute.
I like the subtle blush you have on Wolf's face. For some reason, I keep thinking Shadow's face should be beet red. Or at least more of an obvious blush. He looks pretty freaked out, probably embarassed too and I think the blush would help to convey that.
Nice job on the eye. Bam! It's so bold.
I like the fangs, I don't know if it's because he's half dragon or just a style thing you do but it looks nice.
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I really really like it! Just add some more details to the face and skin, and maybe some more shadows adn I think it will look amazingly perfect.
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Hey there =] I really liked this one, the coloring of the eye was really good. The one thing I would change is the thickness of the girls neck, the angle at which she's kissing him is really hard to get, and sometimes just looks strange anyway. So I'd thin her out a bit and maybe shade a bit more. Necks are difficult, and I think you did pretty good with it =]
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