Literary Journal FINAL PRODUCT

Done in Adobe Illustrator. Hopefully everything got fixed!



Thanks!
-Durrs

I like this one much better.

This is a really great piece.

Your drawing skills must be very high... Nice job on that I will never be able to draw this well. XD
I like how it's all in blue, that's very good.

The only problem is, is that it's so busy. There is a ton of random bodies and activities... It's kind of odd.

Good job anyways

Keep drawing,
Alzora

I like the second one, the colors better than the third

The entry at the top has some images that could be take to be inappropriate so not that one.

But the other two, hmm. They're kind of nifty! There's a few places where the quotes get hard to read so maybe look at jumbling them about a bit, but in general I like. The first of the two is better. Much clearer, brighter. The writing isn't subdued by the blue background as it is in the last one.

You haven't referenced the big key quote though, the one closest to the middle of the page about schizophrenia. Someone has to have said it first and if you can't find out who, I think you should change it for another. That way we avoid any awkwardness that could come from copyright issues and what have you.

Well good luck in the contest!

Heather xxx

I really like the idea behind this one I only wish that the words were a little easier to follow. I got lost a few times when trying to read some of the quotes x) Also, I think there should be different fonts and colors. I don't get why they all had to be black and blue. I guess those are the colors of the website, but I'd have done something a little more flashy.
Great job, and good luck!

Hmm, looks a lot like Wordle.net work!

I thought about doing something like that, but I'm a controlling person. On those programs I can't control where single words go, I can't control the size of single words or the colour of particular ones. I can't keep phrases together. I also wouldn't have been able to edit what text was there, changing its position and adding Nate in, while keeping all the other positions the same. And, seriously, look at my other work. I go over the top for YWS. I did this all myself, and I'm proud of that fact I don't care about winning, but I don't want to be taken for a cheat.