Why am I a Christian?

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I had noooooo idea this would get the kind of response it did... I only expected about four comments. Instead, I got about thirty-five.

This is not about works, or about religion, despite the title. It's about the passion, the good parts of the better churches I've been to. There are bad parts too, but this was a "Why should I even believe this?" thing for me. The funny thing is, it was almost a blog post--and it would have been, if I had even one person that commented on my blog. :/ As it stands, I think I like the way this turned out.
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So I'm sick and tired of people spouting "Christianese" because I've heard it all my life, and it's not real. It sounds fake, it feels fake and I hate it. I honestly do. What I'm talking about are those platitudes and cliches and fixed words and answers Christians will use to try to comfort and advise. To hell with that! We need real words! We need plain language! We need people looking us in the face and saying things so fiercely and passionately that we can't help but pay attention.

I've been guilty of Christianese myself--it's easy to fall into, especially when you've grown up around it.

But the point of this is to show why I still hold on to my faith. It was going to be a blog post, but I felt the need to post it like this. It's still very rough, but it's also a stream-of-consciousness type thing.

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Why am I a Christian?

Because last night, my youth pastor looked me in the eye and told me I was beautiful. And when my eyes flickered towards the door--because I dislike long periods of eye contact, because his gaze was intense--he got mad!

"Don't look away! Don't you believe you're beautiful? Why would you deny it? Why would you lie to yourself like that?"

There were tears in his eyes as he crossed the room to hug me, and I couldn't help but cry myself.

Why am I a Christian?

Because I know people who can look at you and say just what you've been needing to hear, even if you've only known each other for all of five minutes.

Why am I a Christian?

Because when I close my eyes, pictures flash across my vision. I see my last youth group around a pool table, and know that it's a message--they're playing games. I look at the woman next to me and see scrawny Holocaust victim legs, then see her growing fatter and fatter until she wells up like a balloon. And when I tell her that I feel it means she's been starved for love and she's going to be fed, she smiles and says that she's been hearing that from other people, and turns to pray for me. And when she prays for me, she prays I'll find a husband--which is something I've been longing for, but have never mentioned to anyone.

Then a girl puts her hand on my knee, and I see a canary and a vulture and an eagle and another bird flying above a fire, sailing to land on a branch before turning from aqua to white to black, before the black and white start competing for dominance. And I'm not sure what a bird means, but I know she's going to have to struggle against her darker nature and she'll be able to fly above danger, and I tell her so, and she is encouraged.

Why am I a Christian?

Because when the music starts playing and people start singing and shouting and dancing I can't help but smile. Because when I let myself go, there is an euphoria waiting that's better than any drug (not that I'd know, because I hate drugs) and there's no worrying about self-harm or memory blanks or morning afters because this is a spiritual high, and because the people around you will catch you if you fall to the ground and cover you with a blanket.

Why am I a Christian?

Because I've seen a woman's too-short leg grow long. I've heard of people being raised from the dead, and it's a common occurrence for miracles to happen, because the Holy Spirit is in us and it's more powerful than anything else, and this is the way it should be.

Why am I a Christian?

Because Christians are people who intentionally search out the worst part of their city they can find, and they walk down streets that have been deserted for fear of murder and rape and hospital visits, and they are not harmed, because they see the gang walking towards them and they don't run in fear, but walk forward saying "I love you. Can we pray together?"

Why am I a Christian?

Because Christians are crazy! They sing and dance to worship music as though they are drunk. They do things that defy reality and know things they have no way of knowing and have no fear, because God is love, and there Is no fear in love, so they are fearless. And they know it sounds crazy because they've been in the slums or the churches that tell them "You're demonized!" but they know how wonderful it is. And they can't be stopped, even in death, because they are more than their physical bodies and they know it, so they walk in power.

Why am I a Christian?

Because I've never experienced that kind of crazy , wild love anywhere else.

I am a Christian. I live in love. Therefore, I have no fear.
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I love you. I loved this. It was wonderful, thank you for writing it. It's really hard when some people give Christians a bad rep, I want to say, "But that's not what being a Christian is really about!" You described this beautifully, and I really enjoyed it.
God bless you, and I'm estatic to have proof that there are people like this out there. It's really comforting, you know?
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This gave me chills. Its beautiful and I think that any real Christian can relate to this. There are literally tears in my eyes. I'm so glad there are people like you out there who know why they are Christian. I am really inspired and I feel so uplifted, thank you so very much for posting this. God bless you.
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heey anime!!
This an awesome write and I loved it and I'm really glad you posted it! *hugs*
Yup that was all XD It's just awesome!
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So... *wise Alec* why is it that girls are "beautiful" but boys are "hawt"? Honestly...
After reading your lyrics, by the way, I wonder why more people can't be more honest about these things. And why, in most cases, you'll never hear of a woman abusing a man... We men aren't evil.

This is a wonderful piece, and I wish someone'd put it up sooner.
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I was raised in a fire-tongued hallelujah Pentecostal household, so I understood every last bit of this from start to finish. I've been pushed to the ground a few times, and a few pastors (and a televangelist) have told me to my face that I'm supposed to preach or something.

Anyway, whether I agree or not is not important; I’m reviewing your writing, and I really just want to point out one major thing that I hit along the way and tie up some loose ends for you.

When you get to your vision in the middle of the piece—the pool table, woman with deformed legs, and the birds—you get very bogged down with your flow. The rest of the piece is overwhelmingly peppy and quick, but these two paragraphs just drag on and on. Try to cut back on details if you can, or maybe even cut out the vision of the birds. I think that’s particularly slow.

It was funny when you mentioned the folks walking up to a gang to pray because a friend of mine did that when I was probably…fifteen. We were in Charleston, SC, and she walked into the middle of the roughest looking people you’ve ever seen and just smiled at them. I was scared breathless and all that jazz, but she was just so happy about it. And I think her attitude kept her safe.

Anyway, your grammar/punctuation/syntax is fairly decent—other than your starting most sentences with “because” incorrectly or that jazz, you’re fine; however, don’t worry about that because it’s a stylistic choice—totally acceptable in creative writing.

I don’t like “too-short leg”. It’s weird phrasing. Describe it better.

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*HUGS*

LOVE IT! I can relate in big ways to what you say here!

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So I'm sick and tired of people spouting "Christianese" because I've heard it all my life, and it's not real. It sounds fake, it feels fake and I hate it. I honestly do.

Joining you whole hartedly in this!

Why am I a Christian?

Because Christians are crazy! They sing and dance to worship music as though they are drunk. They do things that defy reality and know things they have no way of knowing and have no fear, because God is love, and there Is no fear in love, so they are fearless. And they know it sounds crazy because they've been in the slums or the churches that tell them "You're demonized!" but they know how wonderful it is. And they can't be stopped, even in death, because they are more than their physical bodies and they know it, so they walk in power.
[/quote][/quote] You don't know how much this fits me!

As for your writing style I love it and I also like the way you formatted your piece.

Keep writing and letting you light shine!
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Er, this may just be me being dumb, but what exactly is Christianese anyway? I have never heard of it before.

I am not quite certain of this... this may be because I am a horrible, skeptical person, but I never really considered being Christian as having visions and the like, so while I was reading this, I was a bit confused and I wondered, "What exactly do these visions have to do with the identity as a Christian?" And then the euphoric highs and everything. I mean, I can how the love part has to do with being a Christian because being a Christian means that you are commanded to love, despite everything. But, I am not quite sure with how losing yourself to music in euphoria, for example, is Christian... I play music in concerts frequently and I am lost in the music, but some of the music is secular and has no real basis in Christianity -- I just love to play it and my love leaks out for it, lol. So, I guess my question is, you have all these images about -- what makes them distinctively Christian? How does following Christ (and not just Christ's followers!) do this? Explain this, and I think you'll have a stronger piece. :)
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I liked it a lot. It really strung a chord with me, even if I am not a Christian. We all should be proud of our religion and be real instead of giving up these false words. We should comfort people with reality and be passionate instead of passiveness. I like it a lot. Stay strong.
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Hey, hey Ani.

I love you so much right now that it's not even funny, and this won't be much of a review, but I felt inclined to say something about it. xD Starting with: I adored this piece, and of course, since I'm a Christian, I agree with it. oo" (That's more than natural, right?)

My very, very favorite part was this:

Because when the music starts playing and people start singing and shouting and dancing I can't help but smile. Because when I let myself go, there is an euphoria waiting that's better than any drug (not that I'd know, because I hate drugs) and there's no worrying about self-harm or memory blanks or morning afters because this is a spiritual high, and because the people around you will catch you if you fall to the ground and cover you with a blanket.


(Woah, that turned out longer than I thought it would. oo" Sorry about that.) But, I've heard a friend of mine say that "it must just be your area or something" when telling her about that. (I have no idea what she meant by that, but okay.) And, since you're in Texas and I'm way up north in SK, Canada, I can happily say that, "No, my area is not just totally insane! 8D" (Assuming that's what she meant, anyways. I'm not totally sure.) The only thing that I didn't really like about it was the bit you put in brackets. >.< (I just noticed and bolded it all of ten seconds ago.) It just sort of disrupted the flow and distracted me from the rest of the paragraph for a bit there. You just don't need it in there in my opinion. xD

So yeah, that's all I have to say. :3 You're awesome.

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HaydenSmith wrote:One word:

AMEN!


What he said.
Lovely, and true piece.
I'm tired of people being so soft and watering everything down. Half of them don't even know what Christianity truly is.
Everyone needs to ask themselves this question. Stop remolding the Gospel people!
( don't do that to God's property.- It's not Burger King ( can't "have it your way'))

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Yes, yes, YES. I love it! Sometimes, people make an opinion about Christians before even getting to know us. But we're more than just soft-spoken people who walk around saying, "God bless." I mean, sure, there's that, but Christianity is so much more! I love how you came across in this, and I thought your words were true. This was upbeat and honest, and I liked how you said what needed to be said- forget what non- Christians think (thought) about our faith! Does that make any sense? Probably not in the way I intended... but maybe you got the point. Good. This was a fresh new way to speak about why we believe. Thanks for writing this! Oh, and a *like* and *follow* for you. ;)
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Jesus power! I felt it all the way through, best thing I've read today! Keep Writing!
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