Justice

Toads that hop along the road
Are squashed by tires as they go.
There are far too many, after all,
Do your best to squash some more.

People jump and people run,
I see them having so much fun,
While children bake and starve and die.
"Try to forget." "You should remember." "Why?"

The truth is the colossal joke
That if humans all went up in smoke,
The world would get on very well.
Let’s face it: we should to go to hell.

Toads that hop along the road A
Are squashed by tires as they go. B
There are far too many, after all, C
Do your best to squash some more. D

People jump and people run, A
I see them having so much fun, A
While children bake and starve and die. B
"Try to forget." "You should remember." "Why?" B

The truth is the colossal joke A
That if humans all went up in smoke, A
The world would get on very well. B
Let’s face it: we should to go to hell. B

The rhyme scheme is off in the first stanza, but it was a decent poem, very cute. I liked it. Keep Writing!

Thank you Ignatius I know, I can't seem to make the first stanza work perfectly; that slant rhyme is the best I can do. Unless anyone else has any ideas?

Awesome poem.

Although what Ignatius said is true I still like it a lot.
There was great emotion and the flow was wonderful.
I think the only thing you could use a bit more of is imagery. It would make it really awesome but I know that it will be hard to fit it in so that it rhymes.
So, if you can fit in some imagery - great, if you can't your poem is still wonderful.

Keep writing,
Alzora