Night

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For those of you that didn't know -pretty much all of you- I suffer from insomnia. This poem below explains why I suffer from it.

Night

The quaint and subtle humming of the thoughts inside my head
is ever so apparent in the silence of the dead.
When darkness falls I'm deaf to all
but my head's own restless call.


I wrote this because I couldn't sleep.




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Short, sweet, and to the point: I couldn't ask for more for a poem like this. You got the idea across fantastically. *clicks like* Great job!
Shakespearian tongue-twister:

To sit in solemn silence
In a dark, dank dock
In a pestilential prison
With a lifelong lock;
Awaiting the sensation
Of a short, sharp shock
Of a cheap, chippy chopper
On a big black block.




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Thank you both very much! :D




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Legen.......



wait for it



.......dary


Good poem, I feel your pain, I used to sleepwalk, not that its as bad as insomnia or anything, but great poem. Keep Writing!
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Very nice! I didn't see any problems - congrats!!

Keep writing,
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A a quartet ? Im I right?

I felt your pain. It is night time here and it is a nice
poem to read now. I cant go to sleep because I am thinking of
many things right now.

So Good Night !! :P
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