Boredom

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Hey guys! Feeling bored around YWS even in the chat or maybe any other place? I feel that sometimes but maybe this can make you happy


It's so boring, boring, so very, very boring
Just wish I'd stop snoring, snoring 'cause it's so very boring
Just post anything now!

Just post. Or I'll turn into a ghost
Just post any of your topics 'cause i'm boiling in the tropics
Oh Drat! I forgot all about that dead chat
(repeat first stanza)

Maybe sing along 'cause I really like this song
Or I'll play my PSP, start a little comedy
Run and jog up and down the stairs, and anything, I don't care
Because I think that
(repeat all)

It's so very, very boring
Just wish you'd start chatting, chatting 'cause nobody's talking
If you want people to know you, where you've been and going to
Please post anything...now

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Hope you like this. I wrote this while I was bored in YWS.
I even wrote some of the lyrics in the chatroom but that lyrics was lost in time...
(I wrote this after I wrote that in the chatroom)
Every time I sing this I feel so happy. I hope that will happen to you guys too.




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Haha! This little piece made my day. The way you imply the quirkiness of when you're bored and how you're desperate for something to do... well you nailed it perfectly. I just don't see anything wrong with it, except maybe that the directions make it loose some of it's flow. Insted of intsructing them where to read you should just repeat, add repeats of the stanzas beneath in the right order that way we don't have to stop reading and go up and down, or stay there.

Hope it helped some,
Written.
To fly away on gossamer wings, sheer as night's reflective glow, I would could I cradle child hecate to my breast.

|| Wisp. ||




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Oh the irony of it all! I was just feeling this way right before I read this. What a pick me up =] This made me laugh. A lot. Cute and funny and just awesome =]
TylynTyrannosaurus<3 (tydecker777)




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I don't usually read a lot of poems, or songs, whatever you call this.
But i would have to say this is a really great poem.
Don't stop.
-CrAzY!



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