Family Matters

This is a really humorous poem. I love that everything in this poem is pertaining for me. The meaning of this poem is really funny although I could find some grammatical errors.

My family matters to me
My mom, my dad
Who are forever there
as for siblings i have three 1,2,3 - this is a cute beginner.

My family matters to me
Big or small i love them all -I should be capitalized.
Although my sister drives me crazy
I love her dearly even then she`s lazy! - there doesn't need to be a space when you're putting an apostrophe

M bro is funny just like a monkey, I think you mean 'my' and not just 'm'
He even thinks hes a little hunky - You need an apostrophe here. "he's"
he drives me up the wall
But i always love it when he will call you need to capitalize the I
- And I also absolutely love this stanza.
Well as for cats i have two
even more than you!

M eldest sis is a twilight freak - are you sure you want to put only 'm'?
she makes us watch it at least twice a week

My family matters to me
why cant they see how much they mean to me?

I love my family with all my heart
I need them close to me forever
And can`t be kept apart - no need for the space in between the apostrophe and the letters.
To protect me and keep me safe
To care for me and not make me late! - I love the last two lines.

I really really like this poem especially what it means. So, besides those that I pointed out I think you would be set. You really should be careful with the capitalization of the pronoun I. Happy writing!

thanks for commenting so soon I know about my terrible typing skills, I`m really not good at it plus I usually use texting typing not using proper grammar