Not really into Photography, more of a writer, but i DO click every once in a while. Here i've tweaked the saturation,and added some text. Tell me what you think.
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Why can't we have drops of sunshine, and rays of rain?
If you want to be a great writer, don't think about what you're going to write, just write it.
I'm a huge fan of writers block! When your brain halts, with no direction for where you should go, it gives you threads. All you have to do is pull and unravel the story you're meant to write.
Hi there, I'm Pink! I'll be doing a quick review of this for you today.
I'm not much of a photographer, more of an Artist and a writer but I do know just a bit about photographer - enough to write a review about it anyways. Well, hopefully you find what I say to be helpful to you in some way or an another.
Let's see, at first glance - this looks very nice. It's got this dreamy feel to it and makes you eyes almost feel lost in the pure, light color of it all. The sky is pretty clear with some decent clouds so overall, this picture is quite pretty to look at.
My only few nitpicks with this is that the white seems to be almost popping out of the picture. It's almost too white with the rest of the colors that make it almost blinding in a sense.
Also, the people that are standing over there are well, actually the guy with the purple shirt is annoying because he's wearing a purple shirt. :/ I hate saying this but, it just doesn't match. Should've asked him to change his shirt or something. Or, if you had photoshop or GIMP, I'm sure you could change the color of his shirt by yourself actually. Something that doesn't pop out as much and is more friendly with the color scheme that you have going for yourself already.
As for the text, it's cute and nice. I'm guessing you put in 'once again' as in a reference of another day or something. Well, that's how I interpreted it as anyway. Actually, I really like how you kept the text quite simple and elegant like that. I know some people get carried away with text and then make it look overly elegant and curvy that it kind of ruins the pictures rather than making it better, lol.
Overall though, this is a very nice pictures. As I said before, it's dreamy looking which makes it stand out a little more. There aren't very many flaws with this at all. I can see this in a calendar or something actually, haha. That'd be kind of cool. Well, nice pic! If you have any questions go ahead and shoot me a message.
Keep on clickin' -Shear
There are three rules for writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are. -W. Somerset Maugham
This is actually very nice. The shot is nicely done. I like the perspective. I like the position of the two people in the lower left part of the photo. I also like the way you've edited it. I think it brought out nicer shades, and deepened the blue of the sky. The only nitpick I would have here, as of the shot, is that the tower standing along the left side of the page is cut out. It would have been better if there was a bit of space there, a bit of sky, then it wouldn't look a bit you-know-what. But I still like it. It looks like a postcard.
But as of the editing, the quote at the upper right corner of the photo, I'm not such a fan of that. I do not think the font fitted it. It would have been better if you've used some kind of formal font. Plus, its position on the picture is a bit awkward. Try putting it a bit farther down, to the middle. That would make it nicer to the eyes, and the cloud wouldn't be a hindrance to the text. I know it's legible, but give your text the best spot where everyone can see it clearly.
That's all. I hope you keep on shooting!
Jash
“I believe in Christianity as I believe that the sun has risen: not only because I see it, but because by it I see everything else.”
Let me just say that I don't know the slightest bit of photography. I only take pictures of my favourite flowers and also some pictures of the sky when it's cloudy. So, I won't be able to utter a technical opinion about this. Nevertheless, I just came here to thank you. Thank you so much. You made me smile, when I saw this. The picture is beautiful and pure. I'm a Muslim too and I think you inspired me with this masterpiece. Is that mosque in Emirates? I think so, but I'm not sure.
Just, thank you and please do post more of your pictures.
I'm back to my YWS after months of disappearance, hoping that I'd gain the immunity of books and quills against the harmful realism of our world.
In case this made no sense, I'm just saying that I'm happy I'm back!
This is pretty. I think you should cut out the people though. They distract from the picture. Also, I think you should change the font of the words. They don't really match. I really like the picture though.
