See, with this one you have the sketchiness to it, as well as the hair being sketchy so it all works well together. You still have shading and it's looks as clean as a sketch will ever look, but you didn't go overboard with the hair detail while everything else was sketchy. It really fits all together! X3
I love your eyes, as well. They always hold so much emotion, which is hard for a drawing! :3 I don't know how you always manage to make the eyes so perfectly, but they really are amazing!
I think the only think I didn't like about it was the bow tie, because whenever I see a bow tie I always think they're like... uber cheesy. I just think he would look better with a regular neck tie, but of course, that is purely my own opinion and has nothing to do with the overall drawing (I'm just super picky about things that are totally just my opinion XD) but I do love the design on the bow tie. It looks really cool, and contrasts with the pink of the suit, but not in a bad way ;P
Man, I really like all your drawings X3
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Hi, there's both really good. They look sketchy, in the sketch/drawing way. It's cool! Anyways, I think the eyes are what makes the person look girly. Their to soft and cloudy. Sharper edges, a slightly more closed eye and less eyelashes, and VOILA you have a masterpiece. BTW, my brother has a pink suit!
Wow! Awesome pink suit!! Sorry I have not reviewed for a while been a little lazy and busy. I quite like the character you have created, a personality really shines though. Really cool to see the piece develop for sketch into something final. Your colors go very well together. The face and the hair are very well done!
Some tips! Maybe add more detailing over all, don't over look the small things like a proper collar or a more defined jacket parting thing. Small thing scan make a big difference. More detail in the shading would also help.
Hey, (I bet you're getting pretty sick of me ) Yes, I definitely like the original the best. At first, I was going to say that the eyes needed more color, but when compared to the second one, I withdraw that opinion. You of all people know I like to be nitpickedy (ooo I just made that up and I lurve it!), and here's my nitpick (the only one that I could really find here): the neck is a little too skinny. If it were a real person, I'd fear that it would snap. Oops, wait a second. Tsk, tsk, tsk, you lost the right arm. You would be able to see more of it if it were in the pocket, or hanging by his side. And if it were in the pocket, you would need a slight bulge in that position. ~Brook
Well that certainly is a man in a pink suit! (he is a man right? lol, just joking) So let's see what I have to say...
I think the first design looks pretty solid, like a good plan. I wouldn't call it complete on its own, but it still looks pretty good.
I think the second, more complete drawing is really good! The pink suit is quite stylin', the hair looks good, love the bow-tie and shirt, and the background is great too. I think the eyes make him look like a real anime character. Haha, a lot of the guys in anime look like girls, so you're pretty on-par
You know I love you're art, haha. Keep being an artistic genius! - SOCKS
Hey there! I'm reviewing this because it had pink in the title and pink in the picture so I immediately jumped after it.
Alright, on first glance this looks pretty good. I like the light colors and the green hair does it justice by sticking out but it takes away from the face and stands out a little too much. His eyes should stick out a little more unless you want people to look at his hair, which I doubt since he seems to be the main focus of the picture. Actually, you named this Pink Suit but the pink suit was the last thing that actually caught my eye. In any case, it doesn't really matter since it'd we weird to have a pink suite be the most important thing in the picture, it's just a name. xD
Anyway, let's look at this in more detail, shall we?
Anatomy
It's pretty good for anime. Nothing really seems off at first but if you look closer, you'll see that his neck is quite long. You don't notice because of the collar of the shirt but pretend that collar isn't there and trace where the neck meets his shoulders. Kind of long, no? His left arm seems a bit big but it's probably just the suit. Also, where is his hand? Is it in his pocket? If so, where or how is it in the pocket? Did you not draw it? I know that drawing hands can be kind of hard but I still draw them anyway because I know I'll get better only through doing the difficult things.
Coloring/colors
I actually really like the scheme of colors you used. It's very inviting and friendly and it looks like a bucket of fruits. Actually, looking at this makes me want an apple. xD Too bad we actually don't have any right now. Oh well... Anyways, the coloring looks like it done quick without any much thought. Did you mark a light source? It's kind of important that all your shadows are where they're supposed to be and all your lights where they should be. It shaded correctly, it'll give you drawing an extra push towards a more realistic, 3-Dish kind of look.
I looked at your shading on the face and it seemed like the light was coming in from the left but then I looked down at his sleeve and noticed that the light was suddenly coming in from the bottom right hand corner. Weird? lol, be sure to mark that in the future.
Overall
I liked this. It's pretty good and as I said, the colors are great. By the way, everything I said is pertained to the second picture that is more complete than the first. I do have one question though, I think this is done digitally by some kind of program so what kind of program did you use? Did you use a tablet or a mouse? Anyway, this is good picture. Keep drawing, I like looking at your things but I knew I hadn't commented/reviewed anything of yours for a while so I jumped to this one since it had pink and your name by it, lol. ^^
Let me know if you have any other questions!
-Shear
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