The YWS Ship

Nice drawing!

I actually don't have much to say. >.< I can hardly find anything wrong with it. I'm not experienced with visual arts though (so I can't talk as much as twin did XD). If I would say something negative, I'd say that there's nothing much 'YWS' in this except the letters 'YWS' on the ship. I was rather excited when I saw the title 'The YWS Ship' but am quite disappointed too. Another thing is, this would have looked better if it was bigger, clearer, and drawn on white background. xD Colour would make it more lovely too.

Anyway, I can imagine this in a comic book. xD And it also does remind me a bit of Peter Pan.

Never stop drawing!

I love it!

New YWS logo in the near future? haha, looks excellent.

Hello! I have come to review your cute little picture. This is pretty dam awesome kind of simple yet effective, It would make a great YWS symbol.

Positive: The simplicity and the execution where good. The picture quality could have been nicer though. In general it was very cute, simple and nice the overall design.

Negative: The shading is a little to simple. The piece is basically made of two shades, you need to add more depth, even though it's a cartoon. Maybe be three shades, dark shading, light shading and no shading. A little bit of cross hatching might be nice to, but don't take my word for it. Also the arrangement of one sail looks a little strange, It's the fount one , I like that it's their but I think you need to shade in the poll. Also the sail under it looks a little weird. The bottom of the pic might need reworking, I really don't know whats going on.

I just noticed it now. It's amazing. :3 Good work done, sister Yuri!