You Wish You Were Us

To cC with love.

And annoyance.

Nice. I think the bird is the best part. No, it's wonderful as always. This is sort of a different style from you.
I love the expression on your faces! Just one thing. What is that in the corner?

-Sea-

Yeah, I went for a supa fast, supa fly, supa comic style here. I wanted it to be epic.

And that, my dear....is Appalled Lizard. I use him for commentary in my sketch book. *nods sagely*

Hehe, nice. I think this is pretty funny. The only things I can say about the art are that it looks like you tried to ink this and only did the general outlines (note: to me, inking means more than just using pen and ink; it also means using a softer pencil to bring out all the lines from the sketches, if that makes sense ((I think I wrote that funny))) and the right leg on the girl looks like an elbow macaroni. Other than that, hey, this is probably better than what I can do, so I've got nothing else. Although, I will say the title made me think of a song, but now I can't remember the full lyric I'm thinking of or even the song in general. I'll have to go through my youtube song list.

Also, I think that if you really "inked" this, and not just the outlying lines, then it would look more finished and "pop" out more, seeming more life-like. Though, as you said, this is only in your sketchbook, so you're probably not trying to make this into a full composition or anything, right? But, if you were, then I would suggest inking, and more comic backgrounds for depth (love Appalled Lizard and the bird myself).

Hello there.

I like the drawing. I don't think I have a favorite part, since the entire thing is epic. The bird at the top right-hand corner is awesome.

The girl's right leg (or is it left?) seems weird. It's bending in a weird way, like a macaroni (like Walking dude said. )

Also, is the flag the guy's holding a Canadian flag? It looks like it, but I'm not sure. Because if it is, it's awesome. Go Canada!

Keep drawing.

-Other One