Kitten drawing

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Hi there I'm CuteJackRussell,

Please tell me what you think of this and feel free to criticize.


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Having no artistic talent of my own I will give you my opinion, not necessary knowing what I'm doing.

Is this scratch art? If it is than you did a great job on it!

I loved the texture of its fur. The only negative thing I could say about would be its eyes. They're looking up and it just makes it look weird.

But it's great, especially for being in black and white:)
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Hello there.
This is a good attempt at drawing a cat but there are some things that need some work.
Like, you need to make the outlines more prominent while using a pencil or anything that brings out a black and white picture. Here, if you observe it properly, then only you'll be able to distinguish between the face and the body. You need to make the borders a bit darker.
The part of the head between the two ears looks much more like a hump. It would look better if you flatten it a bit.
Where are the WHISKERS, my friend? You missed the most important part of a cat.
I hope this helps.
Keep up the great work. (:
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well, I thought that this was very good, I love the texture of the fur and the way he looks at you, as if he's really bored.

Now a few critiques,
there are a lot of things that I find off about this picture - and Im not trying to discourage you as an artist, only help :) - For example:
1) The ears point up like a foxes would do, it shouldn't be this ^ and it shouldn't be this > but diagonally between the two ^> and more to the side of his head.
2) on the inside side of his/her right ear, there is a line, a VERY long line going all the way down his body I see it now, it's his leg :P still you don't need the long line coming down from his head, it just makes him look slightly strange, also you need to be careful with shading.
3) Like I just said, shading. It may be a black cat, but it doesn't mean we hae to make the whole page look gloomy with 3/4 black, you can hint at fur lines, show where the fur goes a different way, and other things, leaving the rest of the body blank.
4) Last one :) I won't go over what everyone else has said. So, the cat is facing sideways/profile, yet you've gone and pulled his head off, and put it down so he could face everyone, this doesn't work, you need to show that he's turning his head toward you, or make it so it goes side on.

Apart from that it was brilliant xD Hope I helped,

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