I agree with the rest of them, this poem's beautiful. you shouldn't say you suck at poetry cuz you don't, don't you realize what you just wrote down and all the words you used to make it sound more interesting?
I'll tell you who sucks at poetry, Me. I suck at poetry so badly, I can never up with good ones.. I get so many negative comments under my work, you can imagine how badly they brought me down but that doesn't stop me from writing. I don't let anything get to me and you shouldn't either so keep writing more poems and maybe someday you'll become a good poet .
