Tears of steel

Don't cry, tears of steel
Sometimes it's better not to feel
Don't cry, wipe your eyes
Just remember all the lies
Don't cry, let it out
In a red river running down.

Don't worry, you'll be fine
Once you get to the sky
Don't worry, rest your head
You'll soon wake up with a clear head
Don't worry, get some rest
Tell yourself it was for the best.

I loved you poem. It has an emotion and meaning. I thought it was well written and you should keep on writting. Please check out my poem?

it flows perfectly , it can easily evoke the emotions
loved it!!
keep up, can't wait for more pieces!!

I loved this poem. The emotions in it practically leaped off the page.
The first part confused me a little bit, though. I almost got the impression that it was saying "stop crying, don't feel sad." Then, it kind of resolved itself in the second part so it made a bit more sense.
Overall, good job!!
If this doesn't make sense, sorry, I might just be rambling.

Don't cry, tears of steel
Sometimes it's better not to feel
Don't cry, wipe your eyes
Just remember all the lies
Don't cry, let it out
In a red river running down.

Don't worry, you'll be fine
Once you get to the sky
Don't worry, rest your head
You'll soon wake up with a clear head I just don't like the repetition it ruins it.
Don't worry, get some rest
Tell yourself it was for the best.

This poem is confusing. I love it, but is the person dyeing ? Why are they sad? It left me very confused and with lots of questions. Over all its really good, the rhyming is spot on most of the time.

seriously loved this! I can so relate but really this was a wonderful write. The emotion was so evident in all the words it practically jumps out at you. Anyways great job and good luck with your future writes. (p.s. love yur hair!)