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It's always sou'east by south
by our navigation; crossing
the waves that clatter our fragile bow.

Aloft the battered hulk, we stand
hand-in-hand and fly footloose
in the malicious winds,
for there is nowhere
left for us to make a berth.
Nate wrote:And if YWS ever does become a company, Jack will be the President of European Operations. In fact, I'm just going to call him that anyways.




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loved this - short, meaningful and beautiful.

It's always sou'east by south

why southeast by south? is there some signifigance to these directions or is it just completely random?

either way, the ending was absolutely beautiful.
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Thanks.

South indicating downhill, however saying sou'east by south sounds cooler. Yes, I am that superficial.
Nate wrote:And if YWS ever does become a company, Jack will be the President of European Operations. In fact, I'm just going to call him that anyways.




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I love this! Short but powerful. I agree, the ending was beautiful. I think the whole thing was cool, though. Looks like your interest in ships is coming through in more than one genre, eh?
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This is fantastic, I really like this. It's so...rich and full. Very nice.
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Thats great, great voice. I loved it.
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