Beach and waves

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Hi there, Firstly I understand that some people may think the old 'waves, sea, rock thing' can get a little boring at times so I do hope you look past that when you comment on my pictures. However your opinion is your opinion and please express your point in as many words as you can come up with. Also thank you for taking a look and please try and take the time to comment!!!Click on the images to get rid of the scroll bar. Thank you


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These are pretty good! I think that maybe you could work on the focus a bit, and maybe play with the colors in an editing program if you wanted to, but you work with the rule-of-thirds pretty well. You could perhaps try working on the frame of your pictures, as some of these seem cut off at awkward places. I can tell that you were working for one side of the frame, but it seems like you forgot how it looks on the other side of the photograph, which is also important. I'd encourage you to utilize open space a bit more, as these are quite close and tightly packed, and maybe try balancing out tones a bit, but you are well on your way to becoming a great photographer.

Great job! Let me know if you have any questions or anything, and I'd be happy to answer them. c:

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Very good! I dabble in photography myself, and those pics took talent! Really captures the power of the sea :)
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Oh my word, where was this? These are beautiful. I have to admit that the first one was the best in my opinion. If only there wasn't that blasted building ontop of the hill. The water was so blue and it looked so natural with the two people walking down the beach. Work on angles to make sure there's nothing like the building in the picture. The second photo was a bit too hazy so work on focus. The third looked really nice and powerful but I wonder it it was the right angle for it. Hmm... anyway, remember your angles, everything that would be in your photo before hand and the focus of your camera. Again, great job.
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Hey there!
Gorgeus pics. I'd probably repeat what Sephy said, though.
Alsthough, I LOVE the lst one. Great shoot.
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Really great! It's not perfect, but you can work on some things. After seeing this I may post some of my own pictures. Thanks for sharing!




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Wow, I really like how you arranged these shots in order of distance: wide, medium, and tight. Although, the tight is only tight when compared to the wide.
Anyways, the first one was good (like you said, clichéd, but good nonetheless) the second one was a little confusing, but the final one is really weird. It seems as though you crammed three different subjects into a photo that only needed one.
You have the spraying wave, which, by itself, would make lovely subject matter. The rocks, close by, could also stand alone in their own picture. Finally, that stream of dark water is yet another thing that could draw attention.
All three of these things are fighting for attention, since all three are all in focus. When you take a picture, make sure you look carefully at all the things that will become subject matter. To fix these, you could crop further, but that might make it a little to small.
Other than that, this is good stuff!
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Hey there =] I personally really liked these. It reminded me of a trip I went on to Bandon, Oregon, which is absolutely beautiful and would be amazing subject matter. I liked the vibrancy! It made the photos look fun and just... really cool. Even the flow of the pieces were really good. The first photo is a wide view, and then the next gets more and more focused, which I thought was great. These were really good =] Keep up the good work.
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These are some amazing pictures! I'm not much of a photographer myself. You captured the details really well! The only problem I see is the focus. I think the first one is okay with the focus, but the second one is the one out of focus. If you clearly look at it closely, you could see that it is sort of out of focus. The third one, you could barely see that it's out of focus, but don't worry about it. Well, it probably wasn't out of focus much, but I wouldn't be surprise if it wasn't because of my eyes. My eyes deceive me a lot. (I should go back on topic.) Well, other than that, your photos are very good.
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