That was probably the cutest big-headed penguin I've seen yet. Although I'm sorry I can't critique much on it. Sorry about your computer. Mines working like a gem. *knocks on wood*
Cute. Work on your outline because it's uneven. I know with pencil art you can't get every line to look smooth but it can be closer. The beak could be a little bigger or a little more pronounced so it doesn't get sucked away by the head and eyes.
Nice,Pretty dam cute. Not to bad at all. I do have some overall suggestions. Before you do anything epic, you have to learn how to draw you subject matter. I suggest you look up pictures of actual penguins and penguin cartoons to get an ides of what your doing. In general it was very cute, just need a little more. detail overall. Everything just needs to be improved. The beak and the eyes need a little bit of tweeking. But a nice picture never the less.
Lovely penguin. I like the style, and it's really cute. I think the beak is a bit too flat, you could have probably glanced at a reference photo and done a lot better. The right eye is also flat, but other than this it's so cute! Sorry, this review is very unhelpful. -Dai
Oh, I wish I was punk-rocker with flowers in my hair.