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Last edited by Kwantack on Mon Dec 12, 2011 8:10 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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That was probably the cutest big-headed penguin I've seen yet. Although I'm sorry I can't critique much on it. Sorry about your computer. ;) Mines working like a gem. *knocks on wood*
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First I have to say, oh my God, you're avatar is amazing. About your drawing, I think it's adorable and fun to look at.
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Cute. Work on your outline because it's uneven. I know with pencil art you can't get every line to look smooth but it can be closer. The beak could be a little bigger or a little more pronounced so it doesn't get sucked away by the head and eyes.
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Kwantack, I remember you showing this to me at school!!! It is super, super cute!! I love it!!! :)
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Nice,Pretty dam cute. Not to bad at all. I do have some overall suggestions. Before you do anything epic, you have to learn how to draw you subject matter. I suggest you look up pictures of actual penguins and penguin cartoons to get an ides of what your doing.
In general it was very cute, just need a little more. detail overall. Everything just needs to be improved. The beak and the eyes need a little bit of tweeking. But a nice picture never the less.
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Lovely penguin. I like the style, and it's really cute. I think the beak is a bit too flat, you could have probably glanced at a reference photo and done a lot better. The right eye is also flat, but other than this it's so cute! Sorry, this review is very unhelpful.
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I have nothing bad to say about this one. It's adorable and well done. Maybe you could do a coloured version?




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That is a cute penguin. The only think I would change is the beak. To me, it doesn't really match (I don't know why). I really like it though.



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