Entry for the NaPoWriMo Contest!

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He was in love,
I am in love,
We are in love,
This is love.

The way we talk about a star,
No matter if we're afar,
The way we talk about life,
As if I'll be his wife.

The way he said he loves me,
Like it was a poetry,
The way he makes me laugh,
Oh, I realize- I'm in love.

He was in love,
I am in love,
We are in love,
This is love.

I thought that I can't love him,
But I did like a lovely rhythm,
I thought he'll give up easy,
But he said he'll wait for me.

I should finish my studies,
That's the way it is,
I thought he'll give up,
But he never gave up.

His words remained sweet,
Though I'm having a cold feet,
Shy to say that I love him,
Though it's what I feel for him.

He was in love,
I am in love,
We are in love,
This is love.

Lovers or not,
We know what we've got,
It is love all the time,
And he'll wait anytime.

He'll wait for the right time for us.


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Dedicated to the one I love, Jaime.
You'll know my story,
But you'll never know my name,
Neither the story of my life.. just yet.


- WRITER,MAJOR IN ROMANCE




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Hi:) it's sweet and simple however there's still something i like about its not deeply metaphoric or brilliant but like i said its sweet. To improve i suggest making it more profound and complex wth imagery, similes etc. By the way there's no such thing as" a poetry" it's either "a poem" or just" poetry" :)
"You grow, you grow like tornado
You grow from the inside
Destroy everything through
Destroy from the inside
Erupt like volcano
You flow from the inside
You kill everything through
You kill from the inside"



Darkness cannot drive out darkness: only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate: only love can do that.
— Martin Luther King Jr.