Hello there,
This is a really interesting and creative peice of writing and I really enjoyed reading it. I thought it had a great plot and I understand the whole 'two is company, three is a crowd' idea. I really liked how you put parts of the story in italics to emphasise parts of your story. I know you're not looking for constuctive critiscism but I don't think you should have put 'the end' at the final part of the story it just ruins the story in my opinion. I couldn't find any grammar or spelling mistakes. Overall it was really great. Keep up the awesome writing.
From CuteJackRussell
