I love your title. It draws me in and really makes me want to read your piece. Exquisite word choice.
But where is your story?
It says that just the pictures are in the attachment below; am I reading it wrong? Is the actual document there or just pictures to enhance the story?
Anyways, some advice. Most people won't download it in fear that it comes with an virus. I would try copying and pasting into the submission. You will most likely not get many reviews just in that format.
~Taylor (:
~formerly Ilovebubbles123
"There's only one thing to do three words for you. Ooh, I love you.
There's only one way to say those three words that's what I'll do. Ooh, I love you. "
