how strong a dragons love?

i havnt actually written it yet but this is basically what happens, like i havnt made up names or its not detailed but its still pretty good!

please tell me if its worth writting an entire novel for this story,


Girl who lives a lonely life, goes for a strole at the same time a dragon breaks free. The dragon finds her in trouble and the dragon saves her, she did not know it was the dragon at the time. The dragon took her to his rider, he healed her and she had half the country town looking for her. He walked her home for the privacy that his only actual transport was his trusty dragon. She goes home and becomes safe once again. The dragon spies on her for a couple of months. Not knowing that the dragon had fallen in love with her. She goes by her daily life… but an event reminded her of how much she missed her savour ‘the dragons’ rider’ she sneaks out that night and goes to try and find him. Instead she finds and meets the dragon for the first time. After a few moments of fear about the dragon she comes to be friends with him. After a few midnight visits to the dragon she soon finds out that her ‘male savour’ knows the dragon and she is more than happy to reconnect with him, they make and fall in love. The dragon got jealous and tried to split them up. Every time they snuggled up he would pretend to want to snuggle with them as well and split them up. Eventually, the rider sees what the dragon is doing and they fight will she is on her way to go and meet up with them. She witnesses it all and jumps into the middle of the fight. By accident the handsome young rider gets murdered by the upset dragon. She is crying and forces the dragon to leave her alone. Dragon gets angry and leaves. She mourns his death and grief and everything else that comes with death. She finds out that he was wanted, by two passing maids gossiping on the other side of the door. She couldn’t take it any longer so she treaded up to the tower of the massive castle. Not long after she shed a few tears the dragon landed on the roof next to her. She figured the dragon had no where else to go. She cares for the dragon, and loves it like her own. The dragon keeps his love for her secret, one day they go flying over mountains and get shot down by a bunch of dragon slayers. They kidnap her and keep her so they could rape her. The dragon was a wanted money reward so they handed him in and took the money, the slayers kept the girl and tortured her. Meanwhile the dragon was being cruelly murdered slowly and painfully to a point that it didn’t even matter when he escaped, it didn’t matter because he was going to die anyway. But he managed to kill a few evil souls to save his princess. He searched for a few hours listening for her cries, tears running down the dragons face, just knowing what was happening to her killed him bit by bit. He finally found her and rescued her by torching all the bad people. He flew her to a beautiful lake in the middle of a meadow, both of them were slowly dying from the tragedies they had been encountering for the past hours… she know that everyone in the country town would be searching for her but she didn’t care, she was just glad that she found her love, the dragon, and the dragon was glad to be loved by his love, the princess, they died after a few seconds of looking into each others eyes and finally realising they were meant to be. They lived only a few seconds of the love life they were meant to share and now they lay dead in a place of beauty, tangled in each others arms, wings, legs, and tails…

Hello mellaniimarii!

You asked for reviews, so here I am. I'm Baywolf. Nice to meet you!

Since this is basically an "outline" or sketch of a story, I can't really comment on much besides the plot premise itself. You seem to have a good idea of what is going to happen, who will be involved, and other things that will drive the story. That's a great place to start. Half the time I don't even know where my stories are going to go when I start writing them, so you've already won half the battle. Congrats! I like that you managed to create some conflict that will push your characters to make decisions. It sounds like you have a nice little story idea on your hands.

That said, I have some tips and pointers for you. When you get started on the actual story, it's a good idea to keep dialogue and the description (scene setting, character descriptions, action, etc) in separate paragraphs. It helps if you use consistent punctuation, capitalize things, and just tend to the basic grammar rules so your readers don't have to struggle to read your amazing story. I like to think of it as a general kindness to your fellow YWSers. If you have any questions there are some great links here on YWS at KnowledgeBase, and you can always ask other members for help (like me! I'm nice!).

Now that I've gotten that out of the way, I just want to encourage you to keep writing about this story! It sounds very interesting, and once you start working your way into the actual writing process, I'm sure it will be great. You can PM me if you have any questions or just need to talk.

Happy Writing!
Baywolf

That's beautiful. A classic Shakespeare-like tragedy of a dragon and a princess. Do it again, but this time with details and a little charm into it. There are a lot of people who love dragons. I myself am happily one of those people.