OKay so this ones a little more themed than the Ezra one. Theres meaning behind it of which I can explain if you'd like me to but it would be a big waste of effort to write it now xD. So this would be it.
Tear it apart!
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You know... I WOULD tear it apart.... but I can't!! It's better than mine so I just couldn't! The proportions are great! Man, I wish I could handle proportions like that -3- but sadly, I cannot. I also love the wrinkles in the sleeve and dress. It's so elegant looking, and gives it a really flow-y look that's great.
The names you give these people are great too. They sound elegant and original and just fit perfectly with the looks of the characters
Great job! (Sorry, I just can't tear it apart ;P)
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Hi! The first thing I thought of this when I saw it was 'unique'. The face structure and outfit and pose all have this great attitude that I can't explain. I like how different the eye is, and the sharp-looking turn of her head, and the lazy flow of her dress. I think they all contrast nicely!
There are a few things that could be touched up on. Shading, for one. Under her chin and around her chest. Probably in the hair, too. The proportions are really great (better than mine ) but the arm looks really far off. Too skinny, and bent strangely. Maybe if you gave it a second look you'll see what I mean x)
Great job!!
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Excellent job! I love the tilt of the head and emotion you gave her, without even coloring in (if that makes any sense). Also, I love the the choppy hair mixed with the old-fashioned gown. It's sort of steampunk, I suppose. (I seriously need to read what this goes with.)
However, the hair around the face seems a bit stiff at points and the lines of the hair at the 'x' could be a bit darker. They seem sort of like lines that were there, but were forgotten to be erased.
Also, the double-shirt thing. Is it her dress and then sleeves she has pulled up to her shoulders, or is it a dress with a sheer-shirt laid under it that cuts off at the shoulder to fall down into solid-material sleeves? Or what? I can't tell. It just looks awkward with those lines there. Maybe if I knew what they were it would make more sense.
Anyway, I quite liked it. Can't wait to see more art work from you, assuming you'll post some. ...Probably should check out your profile, too. XD
I first scrolled down the page, and I was like, whoa! Seriously, I couldn't tear it apart to save my life, even if I had to! As this is a line drawing, you don't need shading. I think it looks better as it is. Simple, yet beautiful. Keep Drawing!
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