Doodles #2

I have started drawing again after a long time. And I am totally satisfied with I drew to get rid of the block thingy.



1.Midnight Flight




2.The Girl With No Name




3.Bleed Rainbow




I hope you guys like them.
Peace out.
*92*

Hi!
I like your drawings. In the first one, her face is bent at an awkward angle. As someone who reads a lot of manga, I admire your style. And work on her hands.On the second, I don't have any complaints except for her ear. On the third, the saw looks flexible.

Well this isn't really my style, I'm not that into Manga (I know, a whole Manga-mob is going to hate me for this), but these look pretty good. On the first I think it would've been cool if it were colored, the pencil lines are really light and I know that it's animated, so there's more of a bolder edge to it, bolder black lines and dynamic colors. Your second is good, the face is a little pressed in, but that may just be your style, because there's something kind of cool about it. Her hair could use a little work just at the ends, but it's a good picture all the same. The third, my only real complaint is the bendy saw.

Hey ehte! Gsp here, and I'm going to be your reviewer today. Aren't you EXCITED?!

... No?

Are you sure?

Fine, be that way.

Just a little warning before we start, I have a tendency to tear things to shreds. Please don't get mad at me if I nitpick too much, I'm just trying to help, honest.

With that said, on to the review!

Picture one:

Wow, this is really cool. I like the detail you put into the wings. Her left wing, however, looks a bit odd. Make the... um... I'm not sure what they're called, so I'll just say bones, thinner like they are on the other side. Other than that I don't have much to say except I'd love to see this colored.

Picture two:

This is awesome. I love the detail in her eyelashes. I would continue the hair down towards the bottom though, because it looks incomplete otherwise.

Picture three:

Woah. I can honestly say I've never seen anything like THAT before... I like the detail of the blood on the saw, but the saw itself looks crooked. Try lining it up better with the handle. I love how the only visible, bright color on the image is the rainbow. The character's eyes look really cool as well.

Overall:

You're an excellent artist; these are great pictures. Add some more details, though. Keep up the good work!

~Gsp.

Hi, ehte! Your drawings are always good. Comments:

1st drawing - I like this one the best.

Negative points:

I don't know what to say about the irony I can see in it though. She seems like a nice lady, but she has evil wings! o.O xD And the circle (that's the moon, right?) could've been better if her left wing doesn't reach/follow the circumference of the circle. Maybe, you can fix this by making the circle bigger. Also, it seems like her left wing isn't symmetrical with the right. The right wing should be bended more since the angle of her body faces towards her right.

Positive points:
I like the drawing overall. I like the hair. It feels so graceful to look at. The sadness in the face is convincing. Her necklace and her clothes fits her well.

2nd drawing - I'm not a big fan of retro person drawings but yours is nice nevertheless. It's simple but it seems a little cliché, like I've seen something like this before. Well, you were just trying to get rid of the block anyway so I'm fine with it.

3rd drawing - This one seems to be like the most interesting among the three XD. Reason: She bleeds rainbow! OMG! XD (She's a girl, right?) Anyway, I like how the stains of rainbow are done on the saw. *thumbs up* I like the other little details like the stitches on her face and on her neck. I think it adds more interest. Anyway, I like the way you kept it simple without much detail. I think it will just pull some of the attention from the main detail which is the bleeding of rainbow if you did. XD There's just one thing - It's a 'little' morbid. XD

o.o I talk too much. lol

Keep it up! ^_^

These are awesome! You obviously have a talent for drawing. I love the bleeding rainbow one. It reminds me of the funny times me and my emo friend used to have in our French lessons drawing Emo Bob (our freaking awesome made-up character).

Anyway, I liked the last two, the first one didn't appeal to me quite so much, but you done a good job.

hehehe. The bleeding rainbow. My friend freaked out when she saw it on Thursday. It's definitely quite creative. I like the swooshing hair in the second pic, but the ears seem slightly disproportionate to her head. They're a bit small. The wings in the first pic is pretty cool along with the dress but the eyes or maybe the face seem slightly off. May the markers be with you!

-Crescent

just as doodles theese are brilliant. you clearly have a special gift for magna. I love them, especially the first one. X

Hey! I like your drawing style.
Some suggestion - in your first picture, Midnight flight, I would put more work into the face, to make it more life like. Also, I'd move the wings down slightly, so they look more like part of her body. The scale is a bit off, but it's great.
As for the Girl with no name, did you draw that in pen? I really liked the flowing hair. Some shading and details could make it more realistic.
Thats all!
Keep drawing.