WOw ! Your poem is beautiful. When i read it, it seemed to be coming from the heart...it seemed so real (that it even made me think of myself -_- ) WHat's more? REAL poetry comes from the heart...and i think yours was?...
heeeyyy so like i really love the subject im SUCH a sucker for love poems and this one is so like real and raw and it reminds me of this guy i like and stuff and he like drags me around soooo much but i still like him and its just so annying but anyway i love this poem but the problem is it really has no flow to it. like theres no ryhme which like there doesnt HAVE to be a rhyme, i just like them better that way. but anyway like the way the words fit together is super important because like it doesnt rhyme and all that, so you have to make sure it all flows really well. and if you hadnt put it in the poetry section i probably would think i was reading like some sad blog post about a guy hahahahahahahahahahahaha but i like it!!!
Hate to be mean or rude, but this is MY POEM!!!!!!!! But I titled it "Just to Let You Know" I am VERY upset that you have STOLEN my work, in fact one of my first works!!! I am UN-following you, in fact I am reporting you, I am outraged!! Write your own poetry, with your own feelings because this is mine!!
"You can't find another me, but I can find a million yous."
"My shadow followed when you walked away and ever since that day my life has never been the same"
