Multi-Blood Man! [Rated R for Twisted Humor]

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Should this be put on YWS boards as a full-time comic?

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Spiderman has spider powers. If he got his powers from a poisoned dart, he would still be Spiderman.

You can go ahead and call your guy Multi-Blood Man, but I'm just saying that it seems only loosely relative to him, and hardly rolls of the tongue or peaks my interest.




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The name rolls off my toungue just fine. And maybe if you read a couple of the episodes (after I post them) you would like it more.




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Yeah, having the actual comics would give me a more educated opinion, I suppose. I just can't help but flinch at a name that sounds like something I would have come up with in elementary school. But hey, it's your comic, and it's the content that really matters, right? I'm just being a harsh critic.




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You never do that to me.
Especially Geoffry the Rock.

If Spiderman has spider powers from a poisoned dart then he'd be Poisoned Dart Man, because he wouldnt get the idea of being a spider if a spider never bit him.

Actually Im just throwing random stuff out.
You shouldn't judge a book by it's cover, instead, you should read every single book to see what every book is about before you even come close to judging its viability.




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If you think about it though, he does have spider powers. I mean, he wakes up and there's web all over his room. That sorta thing. Also, does he ever actually realise when the spider bites him? I suppose he must do... but I agree with Bobo here, it's more about the powers they have, not where they come from.




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I think he shuold be called Oprah-Man or something with less than three words in it.
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Agreed. Multi-blood man does seem a bit much.




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Sponson, you make me laugh. I don't think it was Spider-man's idea to get spider powers; they just happened. Also, I'm not a harsh critic of your comics because a) in many cases, they're meant to be dumb or cheesy, and b) you don't have any characters named Multi-Blood Man. lol




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sorry, but that last remark sounded biased to me.




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No point in taking a poll or arguing about it.

If you want to, do it, as long as the rapist part doesn't get out of hand. I personally don't find that part funny, but it's your comic. The fact that he is 1/3 Oprah made me chuckle though...

And Bobo, this seems like a spoof comic. The hero's name isn't worth arguing over; it's a spoof. (I am correct in assuming this is a humorous comic, right? xD)

Bobo, are you alright? You seem to be acting a bit different. Or maybe it's just me.
Last edited by Doctor Kitty on Sun Mar 12, 2006 7:06 pm, edited 1 time in total.




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Yeah, it's a spoof comic. I can't do action very well :P




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Okay, let me explain my change in behavoir. I've just gotten into a mode of being extremely critical of comics because I'm currently working on a comic-book-type character for entry into VOID, and to get in, I need to take it very seriously and catch every one of my mistakes. If it weren't for this, I probably wouldn't have made any comments, although Multi-Blood Man would still bug me as a name and the rapist part makes me wary. Of course it's your comic, and our opinions don't matter, but coming from the point of view of a reader, I'm just giving my advice that another name might be better--maybe even just brainstorm a bunch of names and see if you like one better than Multi-Blood Man. If not, then that's fine, but don't settle for your first thought when your second might be a million times better, y'know.

So yeah, I'm taking this way too seriously, but now at least you know why.

EDIT: By the way, I really am looking forward to the actual comics. It sounds like they could be pretty cool, and I'm anxious to find out.




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Well thanks for explaining why. And I'm looking forward to your comic as well. The first issue should be up in a few days.




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This was nice. Just wasn't funny. Nor did it have a point. At all.




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Yeah, its kinda hard to do that with one comic.
Grab a comic like bob and george, dominic deegan, or road waffles and read one random comic.
Yeah...
You shouldn't judge a book by it's cover, instead, you should read every single book to see what every book is about before you even come close to judging its viability.



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