Lumi

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So last week I decided to download a 30-day trial version of SAI Paint, something I've seen other artists use. This is my first attempt with it x) I like the color contrast options, they let me tweak the colors more so that I can get things to look more like how I pictured it in my head. Anyways, reviews would be appreciated. Let me know what you think!

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I like this a lot! It's very dramatic, and the colors are, as always, amazing. I like the position of the hands, it really suggests emotion. I can't find anything to improve on, but then again I'm not so good at reviewing art. But, anyways, I love it! Daisuki!
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Hey there Lumi!

I love manga! What I like the most about this thing is the hair and the dress. You rally made a good color combination.
But no offense, I think you should edit the right hand, but, this is just a suggestion okay so if you like the way it is, don't change it.

Good luck,

Alicia.
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Cool, this is probably a good program, but i know nothing about digital media which you probably already know by now. I understand what you mean by the program letting you control color more, I can see it. This is quite a good first attempt, you defiantly should practice on this program. I really like the color and the manga style of it. Very bright, it almost has a 3D animation look. Just some pointers... work on the hand and try to define where the arms end because right now they are bleeding into the background. I don't know why you dont tryout some more traditional medias you obviously have talent, why don't you give it a go?
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I know it's not much, but I like the choice of colours. I'd also have to agree with liking the position of the arms. I've never tried the software, but I'm pretty sure this counts as an AMAZING first attempt at using it. Then again, your work generally looks amazing =)
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Hmmmmm, this is strange. VERY strange. I like it, but it is a bit out there. I love the green hair. It adds a nice effect. The hands on the other hand (haha...haha, get it, other...hand...nevermind) look like they were just not cared about. Good job! 4/5

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Wow that's good! It's cute, funky and great to look at. I like the way you streaked the dress and hair with other colors. It was very effective and really added to the sense of the picture. I get what you are trying to portray here and I think in that sense you really achieved something here. I like it but I do think it's one of those pictures that you either love or you hate. I do think it's amazing but others may not share my opinion. Anyway I think it's great and you obviously have talent.
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Nice! I know from experience that drawing back views is hard, and you seem to have done it well without making it look stiff! The one problem I have is with the hand (?) It kind of looks like a blob, but the rest of it has really nice motion to the hair and body.




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Wow. I love this! It totally caught my eye! I think it was mainly the green hair against the darker background. Great job!
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