Very interesting. It looks more like a phoenix than a dove to me, but I'm a mythology nerd, so ignore me. Nicely done, though. I tend to hack at my modern art and build, rather than make pretty pictures. So, yes. I suppose that's why I like this. Totes different and all...
The only critiq. I can give you is: Try and take better quality photographs. Or, if you can't, I suggest getting a photobucket account or something of the sort so you can do some touch-up work. It seems a bit blurry from over here.
So, yes, I liked it.
(I lied. Bit more critiq.: The poem doesn't go quite right with the picture. It's black and red...oooh, it was meant to be ironic...wasn't it? Never mind.)
Hello BoZi! I think that your creation is very, well, creative! I really liked how you only did the outer lines for the basic shape. Although detail is super important, I think you did perfectly well with this even though it was only a basic outline! it really is nice. Also, I agree with Csper in the fact that it looks more like a phoenix. I personally like to leave drawings titleless so that people can make their own interpretation of it! Well, I really hope to see more of your creations soon! Great Job!!!
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Thanks guys. Ok firstly, i'm taking out the poem. Second.. I'm adding the second piece, done by me. These pieces were for a competition, so the first one was trial. Second one is what got me to the finals. (competition terms is that we have to paint before the judges, in two minutes. Crazy) Thanks alot
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Dude! Brilliantly done, especially considering that you did this in two minutes. hmm i think it'll look good on my wall. lol hope you win that competition, I don't think I've ever met an artist to aint so well in a matter of 2 minutes. keep painting you'll only get better. Peace! ToLy
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