When the Time comes (revised)

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The time has finally come,
I exhale that buried sigh.
It's the day i've been hiding from,
and I tremble my last good-bye

We've always spread many cheers.
Our memories are forever engraved.
You've brought upon many tears.
They will always be eternally saved.

It's March 19, 2011.
You're undesirably gone
I'll be thinking of you 24/7,
Every single dusk and dawn.

Jersey is now a thief,
Stealing a brother.
causing a lot of grief.
that's like none other.

And don't forget my only older sister.
Now tears stream down my face,
resulting in an emotional twister.
I know I must embrace.

The pain of your absence is too much to bare.
You're actions have truly affected many.
I hope to hear soon that you reached it there,
i'll be reunited with you soon, Jenny.


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My sister and her boyfriend just moved to New Jersey not too long ago. They are really close to me. I felt the need to write about it.
Last edited by OptimismUnderRain on Mon Mar 21, 2011 2:44 am, edited 3 times in total.




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im sorry to hear that jenny and dan finally moved. i hope your not grieving too much. congratulations on a great, expressive poem. it's intelligent.
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thanks kace... and I picked up on the subliminal message...



Spend your days thinking about things that are good and true and beautiful and noble, and you will become good and true and beautiful and noble.
— Matthew Kelly